10-11-2007 Assignment

Using Resumptive and Summative Modifiers to Gracefully Extend Your Sentences

No.1
1) Many different school systems are making a return to traditional education in the basis, an education that has focused on fundamental skills.

2) Many different school systems are making a return to traditional education in the basis, a change that is one of the big issues faced by every state.

3) Many different school systems are making a return to traditional education in the basis, improving their learning skills.

No.2
1) Within the period of the last few years or so, automobile manufacturers have been trying to meet new and more stringent quality control requirements, requirements that result in increasing automobile’s cost twice than before.

2) Within the period of the last few years or so, automobile manufacturers have been trying to meet new and more stringent quality control requirements, a challenge that has led to increased manufacturing costs and labor hours compared to the last five years.

3) Within the period of the last few years or so, automobile manufacturers have been trying to meet new and more stringent quality control requirements, repeating trial and errors.

No.3
1) The majority of young people in the world of today cannot even begin to have an understanding of the insecurity that a large number of older people had experienced during the Great Depression, an insecurity that is the situation that many people cannot find any jobs.

2) The majority of young people in the world of today cannot even begin to have an understanding of the insecurity that a large number of older people had experienced during the Great Depression, a failure that causes increasing a rate of unemployment and often make government spend more money to create public work such as New Deal policy.

3) The majority of young people in the world of today cannot even begin to have an understanding of the insecurity that a large number of older people had experienced during the Great Depression, feeling the insecurity better than stable economy.

No.4
1) The reason of aging is a puzzle that has perplexed humanity for millennia, a puzzle that cause the high rate of old people population issue that we should resolve as rapidly as possible.

2) The reason of aging is a puzzle that has perplexed humanity for millennia, a mystery that many scientists have tried to resolve but yet have not.

3) The reason of aging is a puzzle that has perplexed humanity for millennia, tried to resolve by many scientists all over the world.

No.5
1) The successful accomplishment of test-tube fertilization of embryo has raised many issues of an ethical nature that continue to trouble both scientists and laypeople, issues that are one of the most important issue in the world recently.

2) The successful accomplishment of test-tube fertilization of embryo has raised many issues of an ethical nature that continue to trouble both scientists and laypeople, an event that have been drawn attention by the people who are sterile.

3) The successful accomplishment of test-tube fertilization of embryo has raised many issues of an ethical nature that continue to trouble both scientists and laypeople, surprising the companies that invest in such research intensively for many years.

No.6
1) Many who lived during the period of the Victorian era were appalled when Darwin put forth the suggestion that their ancestry might have included creatures such as ape, Darwin is the famous for his theory of evolution.

2) Many who lived during the period of the Victorian era were appalled when Darwin put forth the suggestion that their ancestry might have included creatures such as ape, a concept that altered common knowledge about evolution that human’s ancestor is a human.

3) Many who lived during the period of the Victorian era were appalled when Darwin put forth the suggestion that their ancestry might have included creatures such as ape, not being able to accept his concept for a long time.

No.7
1) In the period known to scholars and historians as the Renaissance, increases in affluence and stability in the area of political affairs had the consequence of allowing streams of thought of different kinds to merge and flow together, the Renaissance that is the era of fine art.

2) In the period known to scholars and historians as the Renaissance, increases in affluence and stability in the area of political affairs had the consequence of allowing streams of thought of different kinds to merge and flow together, a change that prevail even among Japanese as well as western Europe.

3) In the period known to scholars and historians as the Renaissance, increases in affluence and stability in the area of political affairs had the consequence of allowing streams of thought of different kinds to merge and flow together, widening disparity between rich and poor.

No.8
1) The field of journalism has to an increasing degree placed its focus on the kind of news stories and events that at one time in our history were considered to be only gossip of a salacious and sexual nature, a journalism that is thought that it should primary focus on a political and social matter.

2) The field of journalism has to an increasing degree placed its focus on the kind of news stories and events that at one time in our history were considered to be only gossip of a salacious and sexual nature, a change that leads to decline of a quality of journalist.

3) The field of journalism has to an increasing degree placed its focus on the kind of news stories and events that at one time in our history were considered to be only gossip of a salacious and sexual nature, accommodating itself to popular preferences.

No.9
1) In his documentary Bowling for Columbine, Michael Moore has put the spotlight on the American penchant for violence, a violence that is unseeable violence such as tease by with language as well as seeable violence.

2) In his documentary Bowling for Columbine, Michael Moore has put the spotlight on the American penchant for violence, an challenge that influence Japanese people as well as American people.

3) In his documentary Bowling for Columbine, Michael Moore has put the spotlight on the American penchant for violence, referring to the genocide to the Indian.

No.10
1) Al Gore has tirelessly urged world governments to develop policies in response to global warming, world governments that is reluctant to agree with his voice, especially if it is developing country.

2) Al Gore has tirelessly urged world governments to develop policies in response to global warming, world governments that is reluctant to agree with his voice, a challenge that change people’s mind that global warming is one of biggest issue they resolve rapidly.

3) Al Gore has tirelessly urged world governments to develop policies in response to global warming, world governments that is reluctant to agree with his voice, making a movie that shows global warming damage world economy and people’s life.